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Great job.:D
I love how you did her face and hair.:aww:

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"The only dependable thing about the future is uncertainty." Amarant Coral:flame:

If you hate Hinata, go join your friends in Al Qaeda!

People are always talking about staying in shape. Last time I checked, round IS a shape. =P
:icondoglord2021:
Love the tattoo. ^^
:iconcho-co-la-te:
lol yeah i wanted to make it stand out XD
:iconfann:
Otto's so awesome. And I really like how you colored her "logo". ^_^

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F: Fat
A: Admiring
N: Net
N: Nerd

My stories are mainly about weight gain, but I also have a 3-part BE Story and a 4-part Muscle Story.

300 pages of favs and counting! (SPARTA!!! XD)
:iconcho-co-la-te:
haha thanks i like how she turned out
:icongarsedj:
otto is so awesome ^^

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I'm a french guy who was sleeping in english class, so please forgive my language mistakes ^.^"
"Girls are a gift from the gods. Fat Girls are a gift from the devil."
i'm pretty sure sanji would say that...
:iconjfa-workshop:
I believe I already had an orgasm over your drawing via a note, but I figured I would comment again to balance things out and not when I'm in such a fanboyish craze.

Looking at the drawing now, I realize that the legs could've used some work. The lower half of her body looks lopsided and 2-D compared to the rest of her. In contrast, the sheer softness and realism of her face gives me the chills in a good way because it seems so close to what she would look like in the real world. Not to mention that her tummy and thick arms look fantastic. Overall, the pros and the cons balance themselves perfectly.
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haha well thank you i am still glad you like it i can try to redraw her lose legs bothered me as well. legs just aren't my strong point lol i like arms and generally legs tend to be covered mostly by a belly in my pics but i know i have to work on them desperately XD
:iconjfa-workshop:
You don't need to mess with the drawing at all, I like it just the way it is. I'm just pointing out something that you can improve on in the future.

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